کَتھ:عِمران خان

GA Review

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Reviewer: Rishabhbhat (talk · contribs) ٠٤:٠٥, ٦ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)

Spelling

• Multiple spelling errors throughout the article- mostly cases of vowel signs being omitted. e.g. عمران being used instead of عِمران.

Doing... اِفلاق ^{(بَِحَژ صَفہٕ)} ٠٦:٢٩, ٦ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)

 کَرنہٕ آمُت اِفلاق ^{(بَِحَژ صَفہٕ)} ٠٦:٣٧, ٦ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)

@Iflaq:  کَرنہٕ نہٕ آمُت - If you read my comment again, "Imran Khan" was just an example. There are many more, for example: اِبتدٲئی, جوانی, انسان, کرنہٕ are more examples. Rishabhbhat (بَِحَژ صَفہٕ) ٠٦:٤٢, ٦ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)

@Rishabhbhat sure i will try to fix them. اِفلاق ^{(بَِحَژ صَفہٕ)} ٠٦:٥٥, ٦ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)

کِرکَٹ

عِمران خانَن چُھ کِرکَٹ کِس دُنیاہَس مَنٛز پَنُن ناو واریاہ تُھۆد واتنُومُت

• This seems to be from a fan's point of view. Can it be written in a more objective style?

 کَرنہٕ آمُت اِفلاق ^{(بَِحَژ صَفہٕ)} ٠٨:٥٦, ٦ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)

Definitely better. Rishabhbhat (بَِحَژ صَفہٕ) ١٠:٤٠, ٦ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)

Rishabbhat  کَرنہٕ آمُت _{دَستخط,} 511KeV ^{(کتھ باتھ)} 08:02, 19 مارٕچ 2022 (UTC)

مَسلَے کشیٖر پؠٹھ ...

Perhaps this could come under a larger section about his views and policies.

 کَرنہٕ آمُت اِفلاق ^{(بَِحَژ صَفہٕ)} ٠٨:٥٧, ٦ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)

کِرکَٹ 2

The section about his cricket is far too short when compared to his career and achievements.

 کَرنہٕ آمُت اِفلاق ^{(بَِحَژ صَفہٕ)} ١٥:٠٧, ١٠ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)

سِیٲسی پییٚشہِ

خان چھُ پَننہٕ مُلکُک ؤزیٖرِ اَعظَم۔ یَتھ حِصَس گَژھِ زیٛادٕ بۆڈ آسُن۔

Discussion

Rishabhbhat can you please highlight more issues, which need a fix. اِفلاق ^{(بَِحَژ صَفہٕ)} ١٣:٠٢, ١٢ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)

@Iflaq: yes, the cricket stats in the infobox should be in Kashmiri and not English. And in the infobox there are still many names and words using Urdu-style spelling without vowels. Rishabhbhat (بَِحَژ صَفہٕ) ١٣:٠٥, ١٢ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)

Rishabhbhat  کَرنہٕ آمُت اِفلاق ^{(بَِحَژ صَفہٕ)} ٠٦:٤٦, ١٤ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)

@Iflaq: Now half the infobox is in English, that must be fixed. Rishabhbhat (بَِحَژ صَفہٕ) ١٠:١٣, ١٤ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)